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Sunday, May 8, 2011

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I beg on my knees
To let me know what my feelings is!
I don't know what it says
Whenever I see his face.

I never believed in love
Nor I will ever believe
But still somewhere in my heart
There is strange feeling developing for him




10 comments:

  1. Good one maate !! N ya nice snap as well suits your work !! Thumps up !!

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  2. haha......truly bhaneko ho..........u can suggest also.......i m lookin forward for criticism too........i love roses with the throns ni ta

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  3. khai aaba ma critics ta hoina !! malai ta ramro lagyo tei ho maate !! chita nabujeko bhaye bhani halthe ni !!

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  4. its not u don't believe in love, i think u don't know what love is....(mero bichar ma hai) n relly nice poem...keep it up dear....hope to see more poems...but yo poem ali incomplete jasto feel vayo malai....either this poem is incomplete or your understanding abt love is incomplete!!!!!!!!!

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  5. la ta bibek teso bhaye bhawisya ma chai kei suggestion pani pauchu hola hoina ta..............

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  6. ya u can say who knows dat m in love n still i dont kno dat m in love hoina ta.........may b due to dis i never kne dat m in love hoina ta.......n may b my confusion in my heart be the reason dat has left my poem to be incomplete since i still dont have any strong stance for anythin in my life till now

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  7. poem bhanda ni malai ta photo ramro lagyo :)

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  8. ye ho ra............den also m happy hai coz it is also clicked by me only........how bout the poem not dat interestin for you ho

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  9. i believe in love... adn i have feelings which i can understand but i dont mind(actualy i cant) if others dont understand them or dont try to...

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  10. o ho seems like my fren is seriously into love great n keep goin...........happy to kno dat u understand n hab guts to express it .........keep goin but dont get insane in love hai ta sathi

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