Splashes you up
Into a flowery bed
Making you feel
Like living in air
You think you got hold on it
But progressively you lose the grip
Once acclaimed as a famous cool dude
You now become a terrifying phantom
Your parents get ashamed of you
Your lovers get petrified by you
Your buddy moves away from you
Above all, you start running away from yourself
So in an attempt to enjoy your living
And to overcome your sorrows
You make your each moment to grow in pain
Until you finally succumb to it as an end
Sad but true !! I have seen many people into drugs who destroyed their life !! Say no to drugs !! What a start,
ReplyDeleteSplashes you up
Into a flowery bed
Making you feel
Like living in air
I just loved this stanza !! While reading this one, I felt that you wrote this by keeping someone in mind !! Spontaneous work !!
So in an attempt to enjoy your living
And to overcome your sorrows
You make your each moment to grow in pain
Until you finally succumb to it as an end
This last paragraph just helps one to retrospect one's past and realize what have one done !! superb, best ever from you !!
wow thats a huge compliment but you kno, the inspiration for this poem is a gift from you. Yes, the poem came out of my mind while watching the movie "Basketball Diaries" which you gifted me and the first stanza came from the scene when the hero feels like getting in bed of floweres while taking the drugs for the first time.......thank you so much for the compliment of superb.......
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