Feelings are so perplexed,
Close friends or foe
Thought of him as my closest friend
And never thought of the twist as so
But today everything got messed
Just an intrusion of a recluse
Turned us neither good friends
Nor evil foes
But now here we two stand
In two disconnected places
With emotions still connected
But like two utter strangers
Close friends or foe
Thought of him as my closest friend
And never thought of the twist as so
But today everything got messed
Just an intrusion of a recluse
Turned us neither good friends
Nor evil foes
But now here we two stand
In two disconnected places
With emotions still connected
But like two utter strangers
Good one maate !! And as you have mentioned that you have given a more effort in this one I can feel it here !! The last stanza is superb !! Keep goin' I'd love to read more of ur creations !!
ReplyDeletereally............thanks for sayin nice words for my creation........hope yestai mood kunai din pheri ni aucha ta ki ma pheri kunai creation garna sakun.........thanks for encouragement...n what about urs rnt u udation anything nowadays in ur blog
ReplyDeleteAajkal mero dimaag chalirako chaina ya bhanu interest jagi rako chaina !! mood jagepachhi mero ni sure update hunchha hehe !!
ReplyDeletelala hope timro mood chadai awoos hai ya i need to give you some jhadka for the develpment of feeling hm...........haha see tyo cha ni class ko bahira jahile ni auta keti timlai bhanera parkhi rahancha hab u noticed........may b its her silent love hai..........she is always in the hope to see you and feels really happy when she looks at you hai.......llala may b this one has givenyou some motivation hola hoina
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